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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 3rd 2012, 11:15 pm | |
| "Oh no, oh no, oh no... I've got to get home!"
She started to panic.
"Damnit! Why'd I ever leave the house?! What was I thinking?!" Her eyes started to water.
"My mom! I have to go back!" | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 6:59 am | |
| "Hey, it's okay." Derek says calmly. "Let's go, we'll get back." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 10:32 am | |
| Marilyn started running towards the park exit without hesitation. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 12:50 pm | |
| "Hey!"
Derek tries to keep up. | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 7:38 pm | |
| Marilyn stops when she gets to the bus stop.
She looks at Derek when he catches up.
"This is really bad...you don't understand.." She said in a worried tone. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 8:47 pm | |
| Derek breaths harder after stopping.
"Why, what's going on?" | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 4th 2012, 9:31 pm | |
| "Usually while I'm not home, my mom has an aid there at home with her. Before, she was very gracious with us and sometimes worked extra for free. But paying her has become a bit difficult so now she strictly stays as long as we pay her for."
Marilyn put her palm on her forhead, angry with herself.
"She leaves just before I get home from work. My mom has been alone this entire time..." | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 5th 2012, 12:03 am | |
| "Oh... I'm sorry, this was all my idea." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 5th 2012, 5:29 am | |
| "No no....it's my fault, she my responsibility..."
She saw the bus coming from a distance.
"I just hope she's okay..." | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 6th 2012, 12:03 am | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 6th 2012, 6:06 pm | |
| "She never sleeps well at night..." | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 7th 2012, 1:38 am | |
| "Oh man... I'm sorry I caused this. I just wanted to spend time with you." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 7th 2012, 11:28 am | |
| The bus arrives.
"It's not your fault."
She gets on the bus with Derek. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 2:18 am | |
| Derek shrugs, getting onboard the bus.
"What, exactly, could happen?" | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 9:30 am | |
| Marilyn doesn't answer for a long moment.
"That's the one thing I don't want to think about." | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 5:17 pm | |
| Derek looks at the floor, not wanting to insist.
"Sure thing." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 5:20 pm | |
| Marilyn was very antsy throughout the whole bus ride. Her knees and hands shook.
It almost felt as if it was an extremely long bus ride. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 5:22 pm | |
| Derek tries to comfort her.
"Hey, I'm sure everything will be okay." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 8th 2012, 5:35 pm | |
| Marilyn doesn't say anything.
After what seemed like eternity, the bus gets to the destination.
"C'mon." she says, hastily getting off the bus, ready to run down to her street. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 4:47 pm | |
| Derek follows Marilyn quickly, trying to get over the bad feeling in his chest. | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 5:01 pm | |
| Marilyn ran as fast as she could without stopping all the way to her house with Derek following.
When she got to the front door, she desperately searched for her keys in her purse. She finally unlocked the door.
Her grabbed the knob then froze. She just listened.
"It's so quiet."
She was afraid to open the door. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 5:57 pm | |
| Derek felt guilty for allowing this to happen.
"I'll go in first, if you want." | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 6:09 pm | |
| "No, no...that's okay."
Marilyn exhales and turns the knob, walking inside. The inside of her house was small, a little shabby, but decent enough.
"Mom?"
She set her stuff down onto a nearby chair.
"...mom?" She repeated.
Marilyn walks down a small hall towards her mother's room. The door was cracked open, Marilyn stops and listen again.
God please no...
She gently pushed the door open, the lights in the room were dim. Her mom was laying on the bed, where Marilyn had left her. She walks to her side. "Mom..." She whispered.
No response.
"Mom." She said louder. Nothing. Marilyn shook her shoulder. "Mom wake up! Please!" She was stone cold. | |
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Brodoin
Posts : 1412 Join date : 2012-03-15 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 6:45 pm | |
| Derek followed, not speaking. He doesn't know what to do, what to say. | |
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Kelsey
Posts : 1765 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Cliff... December 10th 2012, 6:50 pm | |
| There was a long moment of silence.
Until Marilyn dropped to her knees, and started to cry. | |
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